Thursday Class

This Thursday in class enables me to construct my sentences more effectively with the correct punctuation and Grammar.  In addition I was able to view my mistakes that I made in my essay and most of them were commas errors, past tense. Moreover I also noticed I used too many redundant while  writing my sentences and I also received a lot of feedback about Grammar and run on sentences. I was also able to fix my mistakes that I could fix by self if I did proof read my story after writing it. I also think by doing this overtime in class I can improve to be better in writing any story with no error.